Its pretty hard to follow. I'd suggest that you use code boxes for any commands and break things up using bold text for headings. There is also a bullet feature in Vbulletin that you can use instead of - characters. Many people on this forum (including myself) also have a pretty strong dislike of coloured text unless its used very sparingly. The best tutorial on Earth is no good if people can't read it without developing a migrane.
I appreciate the effort though, keep it up.